My remembrance poem by James S

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He risked his life for our country so he tried

He saved our lives so we could live

He saved the country for us

That’s why we have poppies,to remember them

Thank you for giving your time up

Your freedom gave us peace.

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2 thoughts on “My remembrance poem by James S

  1. Izzy says:

    I really like your poem. Especially the freedom part.
    Remember, when you use a comma, use a space after.
    Did it make you think of all the soldiers that died in the war when you were writing the poem?

    Like

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